A Poem by leinahtan

z z z z z z z z z . . .


s l e e p i n g soundly on my left arm,

still and calm with all her charm.

Yet her breathing sounds so right.

The morning may bring a cold, cold light

but I swear i'll hold her tight even if I die.

Even if it kills me--i'll be  s t i l l .

babe, i will stay awake and for your sake,

make sure your s e r e n i t y won't break.

Even if it would take me away,

I am here to stay

and  p r a y  for this hour to n e v e r end

this moment, I s h a l l fight and defend.

i  s h a l l . . .

© 2011 leinahtan

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Author's Note

stay tuned for the 2nd and 3rd stanza.
don't deem me unkind, the words are hard to find. tsk tsk tsk

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This is a keeper of a write, love the vivid emotions.
Like the writing style as well. Amazing!

Posted 7 Years Ago

This is awesome really, love the set up and style. Wonderful write as well.

Posted 7 Years Ago

I love your writing style. (:

Posted 7 Years Ago

A beautiful poem of love. Last line is true. When the love is good. Try to make the moment last forever. Thank you for the excellent poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago

its amazing! i love it for whoever its written for they are very lucky!


Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on October 1, 2011
Last Updated on October 7, 2011



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