My dream is you....

Dreams give us a hope to live.This is my dream and what is your dream?

When the first day I saw you

There was a dream to

Be a friend of you....

 

When the first day I talked you

There was a dream to

Be a part of your life.....

 

When you said that you "LOVE" me

There was a dream to become your

Forever and ever…

 

When you said that “IT'S OVER”

There is a dream

To say that...still..”I LOVE YOU….”

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Very heartfelt and emotional.
Nice write.

[Nawodi de silva]

Thank you and this is about a true incident about a heart broken girl.

[Sami Khalil]

I do like it. Good work.

[Nawodi de silva]

thanks again...:)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure.

[taylor ski]

I like it.

[Nawodi de silva]

Thanks a lot this is my first poem here and this is the first review I earned.

[taylor ski]

you're welcome, I would offer some type of literary criticism but I haven't taken any classes in writing or interpreting poetry so I wouldn't want to give an uneducated or ignorant comment. Besides, who is to say a poem that someone else writes isn't good.