Last Kiss

Last Kiss

A Poem by Indian Ink

One day we would lean against each other,
Like the twain solitary birds,
And share and inspire the kaleidoscopic vistas of our cascading memories.
Your exhaled breath will warm my wrinkled skin,
My fragile eyelids will lay my eyes into yours
I will sing you the song of our first meet,
Shiveringly you will plant that passion fueled kiss on my creased forehead,
Your hands will be around me like those wings of an erne,
And slowly we will both pave our way to Azrael's lane.

© 2014 Indian Ink


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You’re undoubtedly a great poet, Indian Ink (should I call you this?) The first sentence stole my complete focus with a simile of the ‘twain solitary birds’, whilst the rest of the piece delivers a beautiful expression of romance with stunning imagery… Had a wonderful read. Thanks for the share.

W.H.


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Indian Ink

6 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Hermitt, for your review...call whatever you may like to...:)
Nayanika (Indian In.. read more
Wall Hermitt

6 Years Ago

You're welcome, Nayanika!



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Amazing words.Reflects great imagery. Thanks for the share.

~Gurleen

Posted 6 Years Ago


highly thought provoking and mystic in every sort, paving the way to think out in different angles ,........
sayed thangal

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Indian Ink

6 Years Ago

thanks a lot...:)
The story itself is amazing, its been a long, long time since I've seen anything like this. I read the whole thing and its good. The mechanics could be better but the storyline is excellent.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Indian Ink

6 Years Ago

Thanks a lot :)
You’re undoubtedly a great poet, Indian Ink (should I call you this?) The first sentence stole my complete focus with a simile of the ‘twain solitary birds’, whilst the rest of the piece delivers a beautiful expression of romance with stunning imagery… Had a wonderful read. Thanks for the share.

W.H.


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Indian Ink

6 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Hermitt, for your review...call whatever you may like to...:)
Nayanika (Indian In.. read more
Wall Hermitt

6 Years Ago

You're welcome, Nayanika!
thanks raj for the encouragement...this piece of work is totally based on what I really feel about my life.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

raj24

6 Years Ago

miss Nayanika.. you are supposed to reply back on the review i made..:)..
Indian Ink

6 Years Ago

ohh very sorry...LOL... All this happened because of my stupid phone...something went wrong there..... read more
raj24

6 Years Ago

lolzz.. its ok.. :)
i really enjoy reading these romantic ones.. they make me be a part of them... first kiss and leaning against each other for long just holds everything ... loved it and i am smiling ..its beautiful ..thanks for sharing :)

Raj

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Indian Ink

6 Years Ago

Thanks Raj once again!!!

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Added on July 31, 2014
Last Updated on July 31, 2014
Tags: #LovePoems, #solitude, #heartsoup, #fieryverse, #madverse, #imagery #metaphor, #sad, #urge

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Indian Ink
Indian Ink

KOLKATA, DURGAPUR, India



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