Tomorrow

Tomorrow

A Poem by violetta york / nicki elle
"

:)

"
The perfume won't hide I haven't showered for days,
My rooms a mess and my brain just breaks.
I go to the monster for another mistake.
I scream, I laugh, and I cry;
I reach to the top of the sky,
I'm invincible
While he shoots through my blood,
it pours out my mouth.
Her eyes watch like wild flowers,
a dozen daises, meeting the Earth.
When does dawn break?
My back will start to ache.
To the place I'v ever known,
Nothing grows, nothing old.
Tomorrow we'll be born again.
To a place like the Summerlands.

© 2016 violetta york / nicki elle


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

Intriguing ... not sure what you are talking about, especially the part "her eyes watch like wild flowers, a dozen daisies, meeting the Earth". then it does leave the reader to come to their own conclusions which is the beauty of poetic prose. good job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

violetta york / nicki elle

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :3



Reviews

Random feelings,thoughts,confusion, I like it alot....

Posted 8 Years Ago


violetta york / nicki elle

8 Years Ago

Thank you!!
Reads like shooting up Roxi. Great poem

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

violetta york / nicki elle

8 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
This is quite interesting and beautifully written. I love the flow, as well, and the word choice is lovely. Great job. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

violetta york / nicki elle

8 Years Ago

Thank you dear!! :-)
Intriguing ... not sure what you are talking about, especially the part "her eyes watch like wild flowers, a dozen daisies, meeting the Earth". then it does leave the reader to come to their own conclusions which is the beauty of poetic prose. good job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

violetta york / nicki elle

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :3
"While he shoots through my blood..." what a way to see the angels of the Summerlands! This is quite powerful! Just how high can you get from an invisible reach? Penned very well here! Tomorrow's just another day.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

violetta york / nicki elle

8 Years Ago

Thank you!! :)
TTBoy28

8 Years Ago

It's my pleasure!

Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

330 Views
5 Reviews
Rating
Added on October 15, 2012
Last Updated on January 1, 2016
Tags: poem, tomorrow, rhyme, depression

Author

violetta york / nicki elle
violetta york / nicki elle

chicago, IL



About
sun ♓ / moon ♐ / rising ♌ young girl in love trying to find my way. instagram: nickiielle tumblr: petaleyes.tumblr.com more..

Writing