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Hallucinations

Hallucinations

A Poem by violetta york / nicki elle
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i haven't wrote in awhile, so i thought i would update my account with this silly poem. enjoy :)

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Pink elephants are floating in the sky,
all you get to eat is a delicious pie.
The neon blue clouds are touching our skin,
our swimming pool is now just a big tin.
The rebirth of our souls tonight,
we are bringing shining lights so bright.
Another tab to break the ice.
the life around us is so big and nice.
I am you, lets trade places,
everyone you haven't met are familiar faces.
Here tonight we all make our big breaks;
the tap water you drink is from the lakes.
We cut our beaks off and break our wings;
dance around a campfire as an old man sings,
free tonight without a care in the world,
no more cloudy days or our heads in a whirl.

© 2012 violetta york / nicki elle


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The first line reminded me of Winnie the Pooh with the heffalumps and woozles. But besides that, I loved this. You made me see line after line in my head and took me to a far enough place where I could escape reality. Not that anyone of us really like reality anyways, but this was a lovely escape :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


violetta york / nicki elle

7 Years Ago

Thank you!
I really liked this. It requires an imagination, something I feel a lot of writers lack anymore. It's nice to see something silly once in a while, and you did a great job with this. Nicely done. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


violetta york / nicki elle

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Good opener. My opener was lines of swearing. THis is better. Outstanding Job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


violetta york / nicki elle

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Added on November 8, 2012
Last Updated on November 8, 2012
Tags: hallucinations, poem, poetry, lsd, dream, dreams

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violetta york / nicki elle
violetta york / nicki elle

chicago, IL



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