True Chaos

True Chaos

A Poem by Saichiro Wolftotem
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This does not have meter. It does not have intended rhyme. It is chaos.

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Show me the money laundering clothes,
Steam-pressing button-nosey neighbors,

Finding never-landing on waterfalls,

Going the mile a minute rice paddy.

 

I know the way of the warrior stance,

Feelings of insecurity savings account,

Toss a coin-pursed lips-kissing disease,

In a wayward childcare bear flag pole.

 

Wine tasting metal on metal grinder,

Stop the rider wagon hitched next month,

Life is goodriddance to rubbish-truck axels,

An end to the unrestful dead stopping on time.

 

Show me the steam-finding, going the mile. I know the feelings of toss in a way. Wine stop the rider, life is an end.

© 2013 Saichiro Wolftotem


Author's Note

Saichiro Wolftotem
Please do not write "This was really great. Everything is awesome. You should read my writing, it poops rainbow unicorns."

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This is really great!!!!! (I especially love the fact that it doesn't rhyme - rhyming needs to die a horrible death) Everything is awesome!!!!! (Although we both know that nothing is perfect and this poem - like all of mine - needs improvement - just not as much improvement as a majority of the poems I've read) You should read my writing, it poops rainbow unicorns!!!! (But I really don't see how this is physically possible...unless your poems regularly poop rainbow unicorns??? WHY THE HECK DIDN'T YOU TELL ME BEFORE????!!! YOU'RE MY NEW HERO!!!!)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saichiro Wolftotem

6 Years Ago

This is the most constructive review I have ever read.
Ellen Incognito

6 Years Ago

As a wise person once said....um....don't grow your tomatoes next to zucchini. Or something like tha.. read more
Saichiro Wolftotem

6 Years Ago

*puts on baking apron*



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This is really great!!!!! (I especially love the fact that it doesn't rhyme - rhyming needs to die a horrible death) Everything is awesome!!!!! (Although we both know that nothing is perfect and this poem - like all of mine - needs improvement - just not as much improvement as a majority of the poems I've read) You should read my writing, it poops rainbow unicorns!!!! (But I really don't see how this is physically possible...unless your poems regularly poop rainbow unicorns??? WHY THE HECK DIDN'T YOU TELL ME BEFORE????!!! YOU'RE MY NEW HERO!!!!)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saichiro Wolftotem

6 Years Ago

This is the most constructive review I have ever read.
Ellen Incognito

6 Years Ago

As a wise person once said....um....don't grow your tomatoes next to zucchini. Or something like tha.. read more
Saichiro Wolftotem

6 Years Ago

*puts on baking apron*

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Saichiro Wolftotem
Saichiro Wolftotem

San Antonio, TX



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