Danceing with No Music On

Danceing with No Music On

A Poem by Arianna

Dancing with no music on

It came so naturly

The best way to dance he said

As he took my hand

And spun me around

I could feel his heartbeat

Spinning round in circles

Till we got dizzy

No restrictions

Making our own music

Spinning around and around

Its the best way to dance he said

And i have to agree

© 2011 Arianna


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Awww this is a wonderful poem and yah you wrote in my favorite color I love it

Posted 8 Years Ago


short.. you should make it longer.. describe it more.. it'll be better.. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love this poem i love the start the middle but the ending sticks out to me the most but all and all i love it

Posted 8 Years Ago


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