heart concert.

heart concert.

A Poem by Vanessa
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love situations.

"
my heart is in a mosh pit,
it can't get out.
is it happy 'cause of the fun,
or is it a sweet tragedy?
my mind is the loud music,
booming in your little ears,
putting you in a love trance.
As I draw you closer,
there's a chance,
that I'll touch your hand.
Will you take it?
Will you sing with me?

© 2010 Vanessa


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I love your soft flowing words and insights, but the last lines really hit the heart... those questions that face us all... Will we be loved and wanted in return.. perhaps the deepest longing of the heart... Beautiful...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a beautiful poem...
"there's a chance I'll touch your hand
Will you take it?"
Melodious romance and romantic melody.... :)
lovely expressions throughout the poem...
"sweet tragedy", "love trance"... beautiful in a dreamy way..
lovely write...


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Vanessa
Vanessa

Tampa, FL



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hi, the name's nessa. i found out about this website through my friend Justin Street. after you check out my works, i highly recommend you go check out his works. you won't be disappointed. (: Don't.. more..

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