do you really care?

do you really care?

A Poem by Vanessa

Created on November 13, 2007. First Poem EVER.

I'm just the shadow beside you.
I'm the ghost that follows you.
I'm invisible to you.
I'm just the angel who does not know her purpose in life.
You walk right through me.
You walk over me.
You ignore me like I'm nothing.
You treat me like I'm nothing,
but when you do see me..
You treat me like I'm the only imperfect person in the world.
I've never made fun of you.. yet, you treat me wrong..
Do you even care about my feelings?..

© 2010 Vanessa

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So heart-breaking! The emotions are nicely penned. Nice writing!!!

Posted 2 Years Ago

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Tampa, FL

hi, the name's nessa. i found out about this website through my friend Justin Street. after you check out my works, i highly recommend you go check out his works. you won't be disappointed. (: Don't.. more..

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