Up there

A passerby once asked me
Going up there
How's it like?
How's it like being at the top floor?
Do you feel scared?
Do you wanna come down?

Me being in my moody state
I replied keeping it low
Its quite fun actually
Embracing the stars so up close
Bet, NASA wouldn't have seen them like this
There are time where I want to come down
But I don't, Cos' I know its hard going up there
Guess I'll just stay here 
And keep my watch for any hurdle
Since, I'll never give up
I'll never give up, being at the top
Since, all of you know
I am one stubborn person … ah

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

Fear, and that we don't know, love how you brought this together always keep us wondering, like how you bring it back inside Yes it is heart but you're image brings forth what we fight.
Thank you for sharing.

[Mk.t.g]

Thanks so much for your wise words, Mauricio! Thanku for commenting!

[Mauricio Montoya]

No it's yours words that brings forth wisdom

[Mk.t.g]

Thanku, Mauricio!

[Mauricio Montoya]

No never, it's what you write, that makes it see.

[Mk.t.g]

You are too kind, Mauricio! I enjoy your writing too.

[willweb]

It is very hard getting to the top but in many, many case, so very easy to fall down once more. I like how this felt as I read it. Your talents shines.

[Mk.t.g]

Thank you for your appreciation, willweb!