Enchantment

When exactly at which particular fraction of moment do we actually fall in love?

In an instant, that second

in the between of a minutest moment.

When light comes to a standstill

As if to witness the unfolding 

Of the strangest sight, questioning its own existence.

God's miracle at its pinnacle

Is the best creation, better than the sun

Magical, farcical yet more real than the one truth.

Perhaps the tiniest distraction of an atom in this cosmos

Sets into motion the attraction 

for which the whole mystery has risen

Dusting off several layers off my heart again.

Enchanting me, embedding a nectar pain

Praise be to the lord,

You created love or 

was it the other way for you too???

Reviews

[Mysana]

Very nicely written but, I didn't find it clear enough, it was as if cobwebs were woven in my brain as I read it....

[Miles W.]

Very nice poem! Shows off the strength of the light in the best way with the words! Well done sir!

[anne]

NT..I got to read your work a lot days after..beauty..wonderful read..:))

[New Theory]

Thank you Anne for the review, even I was away for a long time. :).

[steven]

I loved this 10/10! excellent

[New Theory]

Thank you Steven :)