my poor little boy

my poor little 6 year old boy

you've seen so much for such a young child

you've know far to much hurt and pain in your life

you have such a old soul kept in a young body

 

one day my wish for you is to know only happiness

may your futures days be filled with love

you have paid your dues already in life

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

Another good one. Maybe.... you`ve known far too much would be better grammar.
The idea is great, well written, just be more careful with your English !