take my time

take my time

A Poem by newyearnorma

Take my time, go slow you tell me

But I am as passionate as the ocean during a storm

I am intense and emotional, both woman and child

© 2011 newyearnorma


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I like how much thought and emotion you have packed into such a short piece. Very talented! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


the beauty of simplicity is often greater than the most sophisticated illuminations! This sounds like a great opening for a more dissertative piece, carefully cautious vs headstrong and impetuous contrasted against the dichotomy of child/woman. A very capable stage you have set here. It would dress out nicely and yield great material!

Posted 12 Years Ago


as passionate as the ocean during a storm--beautifully stated

Posted 12 Years Ago


A good personal view...

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on December 14, 2011
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