as long as i get to be with you

as long as i get to be with you

A Poem by newyearnorma

they say the world is over and we are just starting

the world is falling apart and we are falling in love

 

i wouldnt care if the mountains crumbled and the oceans went wild

when i look in your eyes and hold your hands it all feels right to me

 

they say that all politicians are corrupt and the banks are failing

but i am rich when i am with you

 

so let the world do what its going to do

as long as i get to be with you

© 2011 newyearnorma


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Simplistic but oddly to-the-point. Again, one of yours that I can read over and over and enjoy.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Kim
This is so wonderful, i enjoyed this write

Posted 12 Years Ago


thanks, i didnt notice the typo

Posted 12 Years Ago


Loved this! So sweet!
One critique for you though... "but im am rich when i am with you" You should take away the 'm' in the first 'im' or remove the word 'am'
Other than this the piece was perfect! :)



Posted 12 Years Ago


Really good! I loved the line about being rich! Good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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JRB
love how sweet, keep up the write

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on December 19, 2011
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