Silent Dream

to all those hidden desires and silent dreams!

Standing in front of a mirror,

With a question in my eyes,

What am i doing with my life?

Living or killing it with all the lies.

 

 

Broken, shattered and unfulfilled,

Eyes reflects a distant dream,

Closed my eyes to escape reality,

What escaped was only a silent scream.

 

 

Walking down the old memory lane,

Staring at dark sky and full moon,

Ages ago, the path i had to choose,

Was that some disguised boon!

 

 

Seeing birds soaring so high,

I wish i too had wings to fly,

With the seven colors of rainbow,

Let me please paint the sky!

Reviews

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Nice wordplay, nibhz. Truly each one has still hidden desires in the corners of his heart...

Brilliant!

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

"With the seven colors of rainbow,
Let me please paint the sky!" This speaks so much. :)

Lovely choice of words, Nibhz!

[nibhz]

thank you so much Blue!! your appreciation means a lot!

[Michael Heasley Jr]

We've all been in those overpowering thoughts of regret and fulfillment and wishing we could just paint our skies with seven colors of happiness. Nice rhyming and flow.

[nibhz]

thank you so much! :)