Love

Love

A Poem by nickchidiac

Despite my overwhelming use of self-medication,

However constant and seemingly life-affirming it may be,

It bears no candle to the affect you have on me,

One small fix of you and I find myself stuck

Pining for the use of my lower mandible as my face

Swallows itself in a numbness that

My mere drugs and occasional alcohol could never hope to provide.

One glance across the networking ballroom

And I am sent into a shiver of overly-thoughtful emotion.

The simple sight of you makes

The hair on my severely underused jimmies stand on end.

I can only imagine the incredible potency your taste would

Shock my body and mind with.

Your toxicity may just be too much to handle

And maybe, just maybe,

This is the reason I so lack the courage to make you mine.

You’re a drug.

One that is filthy and horrible,

Yet so amazing that it has caused many to kill in your name.

But even with all of the side affects and

The intensely acrobatic high-wire act I must use to get my hands on

You,

I am forever hooked

And would spend the rest of my life

Without my beloved ‘illegal’ drugs

For just one more taste of you.

© 2010 nickchidiac


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Great Write.

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Wow! This is amazingly written, i absoulutely love it and just WOW this is amazing, truly a work of art. Love this :)

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Love this.

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Oh, the best I have ever read in the cafe by far..bravo. Extremely well written and I'm so keeping this for my favourites so I can visit it over and over and over again. Great to see the truth for once..the actual truth. Amazing how it sets one free.
Awesome..standing ovation and kisses from the balcony.

Posted 9 Years Ago


woooahhh... thats all i can say really.. speechless :O

oh and you make women sound really powerful well this woman :) awesome. kuddos there.

"The simple sight of you makes
The hair on my severely underused jimmies stand on end.
I can only imagine the incredible potency your taste would
Shock my body and mind with." i would frame this hahaha


Posted 9 Years Ago


I love your use of words. Very vivid and descriptive. Wonderful write (:

Posted 9 Years Ago


amazing!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Beautiful

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is 100% beautiful, left me speechless!

Posted 9 Years Ago


women, are so much like a drug...sometimes bad..sometimes good...sometimes both...i always seem to get addicted to the bad ones...

Posted 9 Years Ago



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nickchidiac
nickchidiac

Walnutport, PA



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Hey my name is Nick. I'm 20 and I like to write. Music is a huge influence in my life and my ipod has 12,000 great songs and is pretty much my prized possession. I write what I feel and that is someti.. more..

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