Ride Me Like A Snowboard

Ride Me Like A Snowboard

A Poem by nickchidiac

Oh baby,

Your baggy and self-disheveled style makes me hot in all the right places,

The way your pants hang so elegantly off of your waste,

Yet still giving me the basic proportions

Of your well-shaped gluts,

Gives my tortured mind just enough of an idea

Of your unflinchingly good looks.

Your large dangling peace sign earrings

Give me the slightest bit more of a crush on you,

For hope that our similar tastes might just bring us together

And you constantly glancing eyes,

Whether in reality of fantasy,

Give me the ever so possible allusion

Of you minute interest in me.

And back out to the slope you go,

Perhaps thinking of me,

While I’ve already moved on to my next obsession.

© 2010 nickchidiac


Author's Note

nickchidiac
For those that dont know, a lot of girls that snowboard have a kind of baggy style. I personally could not find it any more adorable and this is about a random girl I spotted while working as a janitor at a ski resort. Also, the title is not meant to be sexual, just think about how a snowboard is ridden and youll get it. Let me know.

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Love it,
love on the snow, a fairytale indeed.
Keep writing, you have such a fun attitude..most enjoyed..

Posted 9 Years Ago


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I think it was cute..your create nice visuals..one typo waste should be waist.. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


good descriptions, i really enjoyed reading this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


A vivid picture you have painted, I like the way this is sensual with a meaning!
Good poem hon

xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nice. I think you mispelled 'waist' in the third line :)
the ending was good and so were all the other lines.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on August 4, 2010
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nickchidiac
nickchidiac

Walnutport, PA



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Hey my name is Nick. I'm 20 and I like to write. Music is a huge influence in my life and my ipod has 12,000 great songs and is pretty much my prized possession. I write what I feel and that is someti.. more..

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