Heaven Bound? or Hell Sent?

Just something I came up with.

Heaven bound and Hell sent.

Which way is really meant?

Up or down no one really knows

With this life we have chose.

Heaven sent we might be content.

White robes and wings to fly.

Having no pain and no reason to cry.

Just simply remember your life spent.

Hell bound with an evil sound.

Flames all around.

Creepy hands and feet to grab.

Feeling in your heart a horrible jab.

Heaven bound and Hell sent.

Which way is really meant?

Up or down no one really knows.

With this life we have chose.

We all have done some bad things.

Does that seal our fate?

Some of us do the good and right things.

Does that seal our fate?

Sometimes it is not what you do its what you say.

You pick the way your live.

Are you going to pick the Hellish sound?

Will your choose to be Heaven Bound?

Reviews

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

A very interesting poem about heaven and hell. Since I'm not Christian, it really gives me a glimpse of someone's inner struggle with these two opposing concepts. I like when you ask "We all have done some bad things. Does that seal our fate?" I think I would wonder the same thing too. Interesting read!

[trainwreck]

Interesting. It really gets your mind going, which I think is reflected in all of your work.

[Ink Angel]

Intresting take on Heaven and Hell, I like it. A great write

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

i see this poem to be quite provocative...sometimes even I wonder what would happen, should the world ever receive a first-hand account of the afterlife outcomes...

this was definitely worth reading

[Krista Weiss]

Wow! Amazing poem!! It really gives you something to think about while reading it!

[Coyote Poetry]

Most of us walk the edge. Hard to be always good. Not good to be bad always. I hope I brake even with karma. A interesting poem. I tell people. Be kind and think before you speak. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote