Liar.Liar. Hearts On Fire (Tanka #63)
A Poem by
MandaBear
Just got inspired
Liar Liar hearts on fire Do you feel the burning inside? Liar Liar hearts on fire It is the one you told before The one where you say you loved me
© 2016 MandaBear
Reviews
wow! this is amazing, Love this write
Posted 5 Years Ago
Love this line-
"liar,liar hearts on fire"
Meaningful and powerful!
Posted 7 Years Ago
Love this line-
"liar,liar hearts on fire"
Meaningful and powerful!
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much! I am glad to see you enjoyed my writing!
7 Years Ago
You're very welcome!!!
Great piece about deception and lies. Had it done to me a couple of times.
Liar liar hearts on fire - beautifully sums it up.
Kudos to you.
Mark.
Posted 7 Years Ago
Great piece about deception and lies. Had it done to me a couple of times.
Liar liar hearts on fire - beautifully sums it up.
Kudos to you.
Mark.
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much Mark. I am glad you enjoyed my writing.
7 Years Ago
Thnak you too, for a piece which I could relate to from a ime long, long ago.
Mark.
Short yet strong and explicit. The iteration stresses the emotion and makes it more powerful.
Posted 7 Years Ago
Short yet strong and explicit. The iteration stresses the emotion and makes it more powerful.
7 Years Ago
Thank you for the lovely comment. Made my day =)
this piece is short , but it is so too the point and beautiful I love it
Posted 7 Years Ago
this piece is short , but it is so too the point and beautiful I love it
7 Years Ago
I am so glad to hear you loved it =)
I wasn't quite sure what was going on here. I think it's saying that 'you say you loved me' when in fact it was a lie...
But I like the image and there is an intensity about the short lines and the repetition of 'liar'. 'Hearts on fire' is a great phrase...
Posted 7 Years Ago
I wasn't quite sure what was going on here. I think it's saying that 'you say you loved me' when in fact it was a lie...
But I like the image and there is an intensity about the short lines and the repetition of 'liar'. 'Hearts on fire' is a great phrase...
7 Years Ago
Yeah that is what I was going for. It needs work to get the point across better I think but at the t.. read more Yeah that is what I was going for. It needs work to get the point across better I think but at the time I wrote this I felt it was good. Thank you for the review!
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Added on November 9, 2016
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