Secret

just tell me what you think

Something so simple, so powerful has a hold of a thousand whispers. In the wind its carried without a care in the world.
so percious that even a tiny noise could break it's very excistance. the essence of such a power is taken for granted.

it crosses every boundry, leaving no room for improvement. An imperfection, a blemish on the soul, a deadly curse.
Something that shatters in an instant. Moves though broken glass without a scratch. Yet bleeds with every twist and turn.

the mark of a war not yet won. A victory yet to be celebrated. A clash between two ideas never coming to an answer. a painting without color. An irreplaceable
force moving though a warped zone just barely making a dent.

So heavy it cant rest on the worlds shoulders. Bigger than the Universe. Yet as significant as a the tiniest atom. Bursting though trying to find its place
in the world yet Not getting anywhere. Struggling to keep standing out when something better comes along.

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

I truly loved the message.....This one is very different from your other works.....Well done dear fav poetess....As always witnessed your class....Full ratings.....

[MandaBear]

Thank you as always. =)

[Jessica Samuelsen]

I like the pulling ironies... the constant dual dynamics.... makes me tingly love it!

[SimonitroX]

Wow... I truely like this. This poem feels like about humanities constant wars with themselves and even with oneself. These wars can never end but how much cause does effect the world and the universe.

I like this so much.