Don't play with Fire

I wrote this about Pyrophobia (Fear of fire and being set on fire). I hope you like it :)

Snap....Crackle....Pop....

The smell of smoke fills the room.

No way to get out; No way in.

Suffocating on dirty air.

Run...Run...Run away.

No place to hide.

Getting hotter and hotter.

The smell coming closer. 

Snap...Crackle...Pop 

Sound is approaching fast 

No time to get away

Being engulfed as we speak

Burnt ashes on the floor 

No remains left of what once was.

Fire waged a war and won.

Life is now up in smoke.

Snap...Crackle....Pop...................

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think :)

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

I have a frnd who has this kind of phobia, he never goes to his kitchen, even stays away from fire in picnics... I will show this to him, I know he will relate to its feelings... Lovely Manda....

Sincerely
Dhiman

[MandaBear]

Aww I bet you dealing with this kind of phobia is not fun. I hope in some way I captured what it might be like. Let me know what your friend thinks =)

[Coyote Poetry]

Fire would be a terrible death. I like the way you described the fire and the burn. I believe fire is the fear of the most of us. Thank you for sharing a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

lovin the descriptions!

[ATG]

A very good poem that accurately protrays fears that pyrophobes have. The poem was very well written and I didn't see any grammar errors.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I did like this one :)

[Aka_Kitsune]

i love how you repeat your first line, it adds to the mood of the poem overall, great write

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

This reminds me of a pyrophobic dream scene that I wrote once...fire has always fascinated me in an odd way...Anyway, great poem! In my opinion, though, the snap, crackle, pop line makes the poem seem rather humorous; I'm not sure if that's how you wanted it to be or not.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I like it , I find a morbid bit of humor in it .. Snap, crackle, pop-
I like it~!!

Chloe

[Sunflower]

this is very well written, excellent write

[AK]

Wonderful! It is so well written. I liked the Snap...Crackle...Pop part:)