Walk in the city

Walk in the city

A Poem by MandaBear
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i couldn't sleep so i made this :) tell me what you think

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Breeze in my hair
a spring in my step
not a care in the world 
Just taking a walk in the city.

Following signs to nobody knows
maybe stop for a silly pose.
Smelling the pretty rose,
Just walking in the city.

All the Architecture more special then the last
Yet tons of people tend to pass.
Museums, fountains sidewalks galore 
I feel still i am looking for more.

My destination is not reached 
For a detour has come within my grasp.
Lots of gravel to travel; Road to ride on.
All from Just walking in the city.

Radios on, Maps out and many miles ahead.
Souvenirs to be bought.
Food to be eaten; Drinks to be drank.
Traveling to the beat of a different drummer.

All began with a walk in the city......

© 2013 MandaBear


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Reminds me of my first visit to NYC, and now I am currently living here. Nicely done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nothing better then to have free time to think and travel. I miss the days when I had long vacations and no rush to get anywhere. I enjoyed the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


so care free and peaceful :D i love it

Posted 12 Years Ago


Reminds me of my trip to DC. Great poem! :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


good poem! i really like the whole idea of this poem! great write! so keep writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very descriptive. I could totally imagine myself walking through the streets in New York just going with the flow. Keep up the good work :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This makes me think of last summer. I had a car for the first time and a little bit of money. I used to drive around all day with the windows rolled down and music blaring.
This poem reminds me of the magic of night and how I love to walk and drive as it's becoming dark.


Posted 12 Years Ago


yet tons of people tend to pass, i so agree with this one, it seems only children, see the total wonders in life, i hate it when i waste all those special opportunities to really see. Thankyou for this adventure, send me a postcard. Thanks.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow...Totally an astounding piece...Like it!
:)))

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on March 19, 2012
Last Updated on June 27, 2013
Tags: walk, breeze, sight seeing, city, wondering, poem, poetry


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