Sonnet of Love

Sonnet of Love

A Poem by MandaBear
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I wrote this about someone I like a lot. This is my first attempt at writing a sonnet. I used Shakespeare's ABAB CDCD EFEF GG format. Love or Hate let me know

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 Although I have only known you for a week
 Every message you send makes me smile
Your love is what my heart came to seek.
 My love for you will last a great while.

 My lips wish to kiss yours every night.
 I want my body against yours.
 Laying next to you would be a wonderful sight.
 For your looks are what I adore.

 Our souls have become one
 Our bodies now belong to each other
 With you I feel like like i am loved a ton.
For you are my only lover

Baby promise you will always be mine
 I will be ours for all of time

© 2013 MandaBear


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Good one.

Can you revise to meet the specific rule for iambic pentameter? Then resubmit.

Posted 11 Years Ago


A magnificent expression of emotional connectedness. This sonnet speaks volumes by revealing as much unsaid ardent sentiment between the lines as what is found vividly among them...A fine piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Beautiful thoughts of love in the poem. I like the way you expressed the desire in this sonnet. A very nice ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow, this is really good. Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is really good, the emotions prevail very nicely, well done!! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I feel this way currently. Amazing write :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow...You've managed the emotions and expressions here very well...Wonderful work!
:)))

Posted 11 Years Ago


You can feel the emotions and it's very creative. Great job! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


i can feel your emotions!

great write

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on April 10, 2012
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