Woman in White

I saw this picture and i was inspired to write this poem :) I hope you like it :)

Wrapped in the clouds, 

Feeling the sky.

The touch of the heavens,

Covering up with the wind.

The woman in white,

Floating day and night.

Feeling the whistling wind,

As she curls up in the breeze.

Pulling the fog in for the rain,

Letting all the water drain.

Giving life to all the grass and trees,

While the water touches all the birds wings.

The woman in white,

Controls the darkness and light.

Stays warm next to the sun,

Plays with the stars just for fun.

Wrapping up in the clouds,

Feeling the sky.

Just a touch of heaven in her eyes,

Leaping from fog to haze.

The women in white,

Lives in a paradise of lace.

Her playground is infinite space.

Where all her dreams take place.

She comes to earth but once a day,

To give the earth the suns beautiful rays.

Sometimes she sneaks out into the night,

To see the glowing stars big bright lights.

So If you ever see a white cloud at night,

You can bet it's the women in white.

Reviews

[Hidden Happiness]

her playground is infinite space where all her dreams take place- my favorite line....this is really an amazing way to describe an women...its like she gives life to the world...really great job:)

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Great imagery. Nice poem! :-)

[Lily Mae]

I love doing that too Amanda.. there are some pictures that just speak to you.. And with this you listened to her voice well and shared.. :) excellent write..x

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

This has a nice rhythm to it. And provides us, readers, a great image throughout the poem :)
Great job.

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

this is a pretty write

[Coyote Poetry]

A very interesting poem. I don't like anything that comes out in the night and introduce themselves. I like the story and the mystery at the end of this poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[外人 (Gaiji..]

very nice =D !! I enjoyed you used rhymes for a while =D
very well written :)

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Great imagery, stunning write.

[Thea]

A great poem, Amanda...Love the rhyme scheme! Keep penning...
:)))