Realm of chaos

I'll leave for you to describ

Realm of chaos
seems to be the wolf has arrived
cracked my skull open and began eating my mind
Nothing much goes up there but storms of emotions
sparked by a dim light of fragile flesh that was yet to be created or motored
a murder without principles, purpose or motives
a simple need satisfier
prisoner of it’s own thoughts and beliefs
another unique definer of truth
and it makes it through it’s first beat
growing up it seeks cruelness
for it only knows love and fear
hate, rage betrayal were yet to be carved
strong as it stands ready to be hurt and shaped
brave enough to negotiate what it is ordered
genuine juvenile and innocent
a chaos it flames in lands of heaven
raping imaginations away
no fingerprint no DNA test would reveal the spark
for the hole body protests to injustice
only the left eye tells the truth as it is
for the right eye steals the magic and keeps you locked in
and a gambler they both avoid for the dice is poisoned
as reason tries to solve this puzzle and places all the right cards
fear controls this madness
leaving the body torn apart exhausted
the pack unites and leaves it’s alpha behind
not a pack of wolves but a nature of human kind
sharp as thoughts, direct like reason
blinds like truth immortal as it’s infinite
embraced the differences that would make me lead
and walk with you as we both leave…. 

Author's Note

headache yet ?

Reviews

[Terrence Chang]

Great vision and theory of chaos. Your writings has nip things to its buds. Well written piece I must say. Great words Yasmin

[max_vonnegut]

This is crazy good! You really did a good job with this . The beginning is just beautiful writing.
Thank you for sharing this!

[Yasmin]

Thank you for taking time and reading this ... very glad that you like it

[Sami Khalil]

"growing up it seeks cruelness
for it only knows love and fear
hate, rage betrayal were yet to be carved
strong as it stands ready to be hurt and shaped
brave enough to negotiate what it is ordered
genuine juvenile and innocent
a chaos it flames in lands of heaven
raping imaginations away "

My take on this great poem is that it is about injustice and opression under a ruthless enemy and an enemy of God and His lawful laws. All they care about is Chaos and mayhem stealing all the innocense and identity of those oppressed people. We can take this poem too to a personal level and persons can do injustice to themselves...Excellent...:).......

[Yasmin]

Thank you for taking time to read this and I am even more grateful to know that you like it and seems to be that you have seen what I wanted my readers to see...
Thanks

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. Any time...You are welcome...:).........................

[MOON]

Heartfelt write the way you captured the feeling and told a story of pain.lovely.

[Yasmin]

Thank you for stopping by and reading it
I hope you have enjoyed it as much as I have enjoyed writing it

[VelvetRosetta]

I am in wonder, such deep emotion, very creative writing! You had mt full attention. Awesome piece!

[Yasmin]

that is very sweet of you. and I am very glad that you liked it

[VelvetRosetta]

Your welcome...

[zainul]

Headache is welcome if it creates such a great write.
Enjoyed the nice work that depicted "a chaos it flames in lands of heaven"

[Yasmin]

Thank you for the sweet compliment even more for reading
I hope to exchange more poems with you

[zainul]

This is my pleasure,Yasmin

[Neshie]

headache indeed was induced. But I can see this being another good description of the mind, as long with depression.

[Yasmin]

:D
Thank you for reading it even more for the review
if you were in my shoes it would make perfect sense

[Neshie]

I believe it would,