METHOD TO MADNESS

i wrote this in 6th grade and found it when the notebook fell on my head "OwCHIES!!"

 I'M SORRY THAT I FAILED YOU

I'M SORRY YOUR ALONE

I'M SORRY AND NOW I'LL ALWAYS BE EMPTY 

BECAUSE OUR HEARTS HAVE GROWN

APART

I'M SORRY THAT I WAS THE ONE WHO FORCED THAT TO BECOME TRUE

I'M SORRY I shouldn't have yelled at you

IT WASN'T YOUR FAULT

IT WAS ALL MINE 

SO FEEL FREE TO TAKE AWAY YOUR SHINE

YOUR HEART FLASHES TO ME WHENEVER YOU SMILE

I'M SORRY FOR ME THOUGH BECAUSE YOU'LL NEVER BE MINE

I'D HAVE TO KEEP MY MIND 500 MILES AWAY FROM YOU FACE

SO I DON'T BREAK DOWN AND CRY

JUST KNOW THAT I KNOW NOW I WAS SO WRONG

I'M SORRY THAT I SHOULD EVEN BE SORRY FOR HURTING YOU SO BAD

YOU DON'T HAVE TO FORGIVE ME AT ALL

ACTUALLY JUST GO AHEAD AND HATE ME ALL YOU WANT

I'LL JUST FALL TO MY KNEES MY HEAD WILL BE BOWED

MY HAIR A SILHOUETTE OVER MY COLD EYES

I DON'T DESERVE ANY PITY PLEASE JUST RAISE THE SIFE 

BRING IT DOWN AND MAYBE M SIN WILL BE GONE 

WHO KNOWS? I KNOW I DON'T 

SO, I'M SO SORRY DON'T EVEN TRY TO FORGIVE ME

YOURS TRULY

Author's Note

yeah it might have bad grammar Idk iM LAZY!

Reviews

[Kyle]

i really dont care about grammar, all i care for in a poem is content. this poem is beautiful yet so sad. it really makes you think about relationships, and emotions within an all around distressing setting, but still you adressed it so creatively and freely. this poem is a really great write. really well thought out, and depressingly beautiful.

[FuMiko]

I find it hard to read in all caps, but once I struggled through the GINORMOUS LETTERING I found it to be enjoyable.
It's a nice piece of work, and I'm glad that you posted it, even if after so long.

[Lexy]

You never know where you might find poems. I found one hidden in my diary, found a bunch hidden in the pockets of jeans (thank God I do my own laundry, i would be so embarrassed if my Mom read what I wrote). I do have 1 suggestion though. "i'm sorry I shouldn't have yelled at you" is lowercase. It seems like you stopped shouting, so maybe you should take the bottom half of your poem and make it stop yelling.
I should say that I enjoyed reading this poem. I should, and I will (did) because I did. Congrats on a good job. (If it's not apparent, I'm a little crazy).