Be Gone...

Be Gone...

A Poem by N!LoC

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© 2014 N!LoC


Author's Note

N!LoC
a lil raw .... for my taste... but that was the bittersweet feelings that inspired me to write this one...

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Another sade song from you pen N!LoC, what do you mean 'a lil raw for my taste', you wrote it. ;-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


N!LoC

10 Years Ago

Thanks Frieda... I said that because I feel this is one of my more "write what I feel without sensor.. read more
N!LoC

10 Years Ago

RAW .... (Giggle giggle)
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

You should never censor yourself N, be bold! ha RAWR!
My gods, could you relate any more to me?! Legit, I've finally decided to move on even though I love this guy with my whole heart but I need to move on due to the fact that all he does is cause me pain but in the process of doing this, I've also pushed him away as a friend and it kills me but if that's what it takes to move on, I have to do it right? But I'll never give up on someone I love, I'm always here for him but not as he sometimes wishes, yenno? But yah, amazing write, my dear friend. You're a beautiful writer who lets their feelings shine clearly through the simple words. Wonderful!

Posted 10 Years Ago


N!LoC

10 Years Ago

Oh man... Write about it Kenzi... I'm sure that would get u some good inspiration out of it ... And .. read more
Kenzi Griffin

10 Years Ago

Okay :) I'm about to add some new things, honestly. I haven't been on here much due to my eating dis.. read more
N!LoC

10 Years Ago

Good for u!
Raw poems are awesome and this one is no exception. Great job! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


N!LoC

10 Years Ago

Oh my! A random reader !! Hi Shaq! Thanks for this lovely surprise!! (Giggle giggle)
When one is raw, one side steps into the hazard of being, well done, great read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


N!LoC

10 Years Ago

HAHAHAHAH!!!!! What a punch line!! Thanks Thomas ! That really made me "lol"
N!LoC My fine gay friend sometimes raw is good. It works for me

Posted 10 Years Ago


N!LoC

10 Years Ago

Thank u baby Rico! I can always count on you for your great comments ;-)

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Added on January 28, 2014
Last Updated on January 28, 2014
Tags: gay, love, romance, sadness

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N!LoC

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