Quicksand

Quicksand

A Poem by Fanicia E.
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Sometimes you get stuck, but that can be a good thing

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I didn't fall in love with you.
I sunk.
I knew soon as I tried to move that I'd be stuck.
S**t out of luck
And head over heels.

© 2018 Fanicia E.


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Fanicia E.
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I love the way your poem is so bluntly honest. I love how love isn't portrayed as being all wonderful & fluffy. Sometimes we are in proximity to another person for a long while & then one day we realize we can't live without him/her. Some people are cantankerous yet compatible *smile* Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fanicia E.

2 Years Ago

Thank you Margie!



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Love this style of writing! I truly do enjoy when the poet packs limitless messages in small packages, and this one packs a whallop! Your writing is very relatable as well. Like I'm holding a mirror to myself. Great read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fanicia E.

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much! If you can relate to what I write, then it makes me feel like I've done my job .. read more
Short and sweet. Great emotions.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Fanicia E.

2 Years Ago

Thank you T.S. Sky
T.S. Sky

2 Years Ago

You're welcome. :)
Fascinating how the rhyme scene works so well with such a short and blunt write. Never read anything worded quite like this. I liked it! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fanicia E.

2 Years Ago

Thank you Lavi! I'm glad I could show you something that's unique 😊
I love the way your poem is so bluntly honest. I love how love isn't portrayed as being all wonderful & fluffy. Sometimes we are in proximity to another person for a long while & then one day we realize we can't live without him/her. Some people are cantankerous yet compatible *smile* Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fanicia E.

2 Years Ago

Thank you Margie!
That was us > We are still stuck

Posted 2 Years Ago


Fanicia E.

2 Years Ago

This review lo key confuses me lol who are you talking about?
Wild Rose

2 Years Ago

Me and her we hit it off together at first meeting
Fanicia E.

2 Years Ago

Aww, I'm glad

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Added on August 10, 2018
Last Updated on August 10, 2018
Tags: love, relationships, romance

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Fanicia E.
Fanicia E.

Houston, TX



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I'm Fanicia, I read, write, design, and create. I'm from Houston, born and raised. I actually had an account here in high school, but deleted when I stopped writing for a while (if anyone knew sisyque.. more..

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