Enlightenment

pease avoid grammer

Cathedral of LA Vey,
A tomb of apostasy as they say.
Chiming through the Forces Of Nature
Confronting Deadly sins as Virtues.
One Night
Admidst this Blackmass
Joshua, A rudimentary crusader
From Vatican Joined this Cathedral
At the Spur of the moment he joined
Cremating Lucifer Was on his mind
After some years
When crowned as the Parish,
Joshua had a key
To Defy Lucifer and many other.
One Sombre night
It happened that,
Joshua absconded to Vatican
With La Vey’s Testaments in his hands .
Conspiring to bury it to some no mans land.
But during this tiresome  journey
His resistance proved fatal.
Joshua lost the battle
to his own principles.
With burning curiosity ,
opened Lucifer’s Bible.
Reading through the lines
he seeked his Destiny
And to La Vey he Retrieved
Reigning the Black Masses again
With great authority and power
thus opting the Labyrinth Path
Enlightment he achieved.

(Lucifer meaning Enlightenment)

Reviews

[Dove]

Not eveyone can tell a story through a poem. Im glad I can say that you are one of the people that can.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Enlighting indeed! Nice write!

[Aarontastic]

Not many people can tell a better story through a poem. Good job.

[Richard Williams]

A fine write, memorable and deep.

[Jazique]

Nice, never knew Lucifer menas Enlightment. Anyways well done. Very creativen and awesome poem with a sense of unique. Well done.

[Coyote Poetry]

I have many bibles in my house. Some are consider not good to have. I believe you must understand every religion in this world. To understand people and culture. Must know what they believe. I like the way you wrote this poem. For Joshua to know understanding. He had to know everything. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[DearSweetAgony]

This is very,very deep.
Feeble minded people wouldn't understand this.
But I do,I understand every word. And I must say this is pure genius.
This write is perfection.
I really,really enjoyed reading this.
Flawless Job!

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

this was an interesting read

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

traced and striking, well done, great job.

[Lily Mae]

Wow, this is an excellent write...xx