Aum

Aum

A Poem by nishantshah2381
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Penned on April 22 2011 I am at present working on some philosophical subjects and this is one of them

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Om….Om…..om…..

Each twilight,

syllable defining death and life,

resonates the pristine air around me.

I hear the silent whispers of myriad souls,

many of them are paupers

and the few revered ones,

purging their souls,

some on banks of holy river,

while many on other side of horizon,

enthralling my mind and body.

 

Every day, many reason the existence of their lives,

erstwhile, for years even I marvelled on my being.

But somewhere now I have realize this void of continuity, 

and like the humble stream of perennial rivulet

begetting the incessant civilization around it,

I embrace the elements of eternal reality.

 

Some ruminates on the desire of liberation,

while many stroll the distances in search of rhapsodic tale.

Even I am a reflection of such vagabonds,

but with the only treasure I inherit from ages,

I repose my callow soul with the eternal bliss,

while I embark on the new journey in tranquility.

© 2011 nishantshah2381


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Wow, such descriptive and sharp vocabulary. I love how in the first part you have conflicted to relating to nature, and soul as well as body. I especially liked this line:
"Some ruminates on the desire of liberation,
while many stroll the distances in search of rhapsodic tale."
Very nicely and beautifully written. Magnificent job :)

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A poem about the ancient mantric Om! You beat me to it Nishant! Pretty subtle, with some gorgeously spiritual lines:

1. I embrace the elements of eternal reality
2. I hear the silent whispers of myriad souls

This is poetry right up my mystical alley! Nice work.



Posted 7 Years Ago


The use of vocabulary in this piece is quite spectacular. The lines are simply amazing. Creative and beautiful write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


"while I embark on the new journey in tranquility."- Beautiful!- a place where I want to be... Just lovely! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very interesting, creative, and wonderful writing. Nicely done as description of words are magnificent.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Oh this is good...I like how this simulates the mind and the soul..good one. AUM..how integral.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Where do you come up with your material? It's so riveting! So spiritual!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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This is amazing, very philosophical and spiritual piece. I really enjoyed the imagery in this, it brought your writing even more alive. Outstanding write!

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great write,
deep and spiritual!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Indeed a very spiritual write, excellent

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Tags: Aum, Om, Religious, Spiritual, Hindu, jain, Buddha
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