Changes

Changes

A Poem by nishantshah2381

Every autumn, 
when I gazed from the window sil,
I witnesed the amber leaves 
brooding the revered earth.
And there this birch,
with its ramifications 
stranded alone, 
awaiting for 
yet another season of spring.

Even, I left her on the last cross road,
and with words of anguish we parted.
The train that trailed behind sometime back,
I scramble now, to catch the same tram again.

Till yesterday, I expressed her many maudlins,
now I realize, that were saddering and fake
She was always fond of the twillight,
on the banks of river Thames,
While I still, like to gaze the still water,
with the shimmering hazel light every sunset.

Now I roll on my life, on the same highway,
with all the wiinds blowing on my bare face.
And leaving the blues of my past behind.
I amble forward in search of sunshine again.

© 2011 nishantshah2381


Author's Note

nishantshah2381
Avoid typos ..............

This is dedicated for one of my dear friend in Writerscafe

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You have a haunting sense of themese and deeper emotions, I like the complexity of the interaction between your heart and mind.

Posted 12 Years Ago


That was a very lovely poem. I enjoyed how it begined and the ending of "search of sunshine again" This was a very good poem that makes my soul want to say creative , emotion, or flow or just something it can't think of. But with all the great descriptions you painted a wonderful poem. So well done and keep up the incredible work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like dedications from WC writers, shows their true heart and sincerity.. beautiful write

Posted 12 Years Ago


I feel like some old soul wrote this! It has this magnificent feel to it the emotions that flow from it are like a steady stream. This is so great!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this poem. The imagery is grand and I can picture the scenes changing in my mind like a movie.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Absolutely lovely, full of feelings and beautiful lines. I am sure whoever you wrote this for will adore it.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


This is such a lovely write. The emotion, the flow and the deep sense of understanding reaches out. Change, waiting for a change....can sometimes lead to eternal stagnancy. I really like this poem. Thank you so much.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Changes will come. Some for good and some are not. I like the emotion of this poem. Trying to understand change and to roll with life can be hard.
"The train that trailed behind sometime back,
I scramble now, to catch the same tram again."
Thank you for a amazing poem.
Coyote

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Posted 12 Years Ago



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