With Love

With Love

A Poem by The Dreamer
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Someday, somehow, somewhere, i hope to find someone - to give this to....

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Love, is in the way you look,

As I stand and cook.

My face covered in flour:

Like, I am beauty personified every hour.

 

Love, is when you always listen -

Sometimes it makes my eyes glisten -

To all my foolish patter:

'Cause to me, you know they matter.

 

Love, is when you don’t sleep ever,

When I am down with fever,

Till you sing me to sleep at night:

Holding me in your arms tight.

 

Love, is in a small fight,

Over trivial things, too light.

Later when we make peace,

With hugs and kisses, we tease.

 

Love, is in a brush of our fingers,

An electric rush that lingers,

As we lay side by side:

With nothing betwixt us to hide.

 

Love, is when I wake up slowly,

Your fingers combing my hair softly,

A kiss upon my lips like a blessing:

'Good morning', to me you sing.

 

When I am with you, I know

What Love is all about, and so:

I love you with all my life.

With Love - from your Wife.

 

© 2014 The Dreamer


Author's Note

The Dreamer
Someday, somehow, somewhere, i hope to find someone - to give this to....

i felt its more like a song



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Aww, this is so sweet! I really, really enjoyed this. Like you, I hope to someday find someone special who I can experience this with. I have so much love in my life - from family, friends, and all my pets, but it's just not the same as the love you receive from that somebody special. This poem clearly expresses that.

As always, thanks for sharing!

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Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

thank you :) i guess ill never feel complete till i find someone like this - i dream of him everyday.. read more



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This is so darling, and so dang beautiful. I love this so much. It is so sweet. BEAUTIFUL, BEAUTIFUL, BEAUTIFUL. I felt a need to repeat that. :) Wonderful job. c:

Posted 6 Years Ago


Such sweet and beautiful poem. Truly, it is more of the everyday moments that counts rather than the amount of events celebrated. Good ^_^

Posted 6 Years Ago


nice.. your husband is a lucky guy :P

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

haha :D of course he IS!
likey like!! ..

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

:D
Your perception of love is almost as similar as mine .... Loved it ....

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

:D glad you loved it :)
Hiya Dreamer!!! So i was just fluttering through the scripts, came across yours and I must say " thats so chweeeett". Having said that, I am no big fan of love & pain (well that pretty much summarizes the writes on this Site). However I often come out of my character, when sitting on a review chair. So starting on a point blank, what really refines the poem here as maybe not the words but the feelings you wrap around it. This poem would have never been complete without your personal feelings attached and thats what so nostalgiac about it.

On the other note, I just wish your Prince Charming might just delay the approach. Who knows it it might keep you occupied and the readers of your, they woud be certainly disappointed


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

LOL well i am sure you will find diverse kinds of writing ( not just love and pain) in this site - i.. read more
this is cute...a girl's version of a perfect married life...i loved it:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

being me

6 Years Ago

maybe you thought you were in love.....when the right time comes maybe you'll realize...eternal blis.. read more
The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

yea - may be :)
being me

6 Years Ago

:)
A nice, heartfelt piece
Nicely written and filled with love
You will find the special someone :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

hey thanks !! :) well i'll wait and see :D
...a very beautiful loving reflection of things to come...love your pen name by the way...:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

thanks for the review.
:) my pen name... i found nothing better to define myself, when i made.. read more
Lovely, I can't say more. Enjoyed this one with my coffee, great combo. :-)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

LOL :D well - i gave up on coffee recently ! , i guess i'll have try it with tea :P don't think it'l.. read more
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Try Vanilla Chai, that might do it for you. ;-)
The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

sure :D

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