A Poet's Disappointment

A Poet's Disappointment

A Poem by The Dreamer
"

when i feel its worthless!

"

(11:30 pm)


I sit on my bed,

Blood boiling red.

Emotions controlling my hand,

Words scattered like sand.

My pen weaving magic,

Whether its comic or tragic….

I look at my hands, with wonder:

Pride resonating within, like thunder!

 

(7:30 am)


'Good morning'

All my alarms ring.

'My poem', I sigh, I breathe,

Smelling the ink like a wreath.

I read a line - it feels so intense…

Slowly I realize: now it makes no sense.

Pride bursts, like a bubble,

'It's still good', I mumble.

 

(6:00 pm)


The setting sun, a crimson haze,

Poem in hand, I sit in a daze.

Fleeing the dark are - little birds,

Flying in my head are -a jumble of words.

'Feel no offense',

Says my mind, 'Its nonsense'.

I look at my hands, I heave:

Disappointment swelling within - I grieve.

 


 

 

 

© 2013 The Dreamer


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The Dreamer
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Wow! really nice description.This exactly how I feel too.A sudden outburst of emotions and before I know the pen starts weaving its magic.This is how all the poets feel I guess.I was actually thinking of writing something similar to this.Thanks for bringing out a poet's feeling.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

welcome :D and thanks for your review. yes it s as if your hand n' your pen is moving on its own... .. read more
vspjaguar

6 Years Ago

As a beginner everyone feel the same I guess :)
The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

true.



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I feel the same way too.. XD

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

:)
Oh wow i really enjoyed this write. love the emotions put into it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

thank you :)
Wow! really nice description.This exactly how I feel too.A sudden outburst of emotions and before I know the pen starts weaving its magic.This is how all the poets feel I guess.I was actually thinking of writing something similar to this.Thanks for bringing out a poet's feeling.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

welcome :D and thanks for your review. yes it s as if your hand n' your pen is moving on its own... .. read more
vspjaguar

6 Years Ago

As a beginner everyone feel the same I guess :)
The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

true.
my text seems to be mashing together, is it this site glitching?

Posted 6 Years Ago


You love poetry I think,

Posted 6 Years Ago


The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

i love to write :)
How i feel everytime im writing my poems....
EVERY SINGLE TIIIIIIMMMMME.
AAAAAAAHHHHHHHH.....

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

REALLY???? :D i was starting to think that i am the only one who feels this way! m' glad that you co.. read more

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Added on January 8, 2013
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Tags: DISAPPOINTMENT, PRIDE, POEM, POET

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The Dreamer
The Dreamer

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Hey - I am Nisha . I love to dream when I am awake, sadly I don't dream much when I sleep - maybe i drain all my resources before I go to bed... Writing is like a release for me, a source o.. more..

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