Your Face Crack

Your Face Crack

A Poem by The Dreamer




Scales, fall from my eyes,

I see through your lies.

 

Fog, clears from my head,

Fleeing the words you never said.

 

Love, shed from my heart,

On a glimpse of your chart.

 

Trust, now a frail rope,

Unwound all my hope.

 

Bewitched by your voodoo,

I believed everything you do.

 

Unbound from your spell,

Now, that your vile magic fell.

 

I watch your face crack,

As your mask falls back:

Only a stranger within,

A façade, I believed in!

 


 

 

 

 

 

© 2013 The Dreamer


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Hi Nisha,

I really like your piece.You beautifully described how the mask of the hypocrite cracked and how you could see right through him( I just assumed its a him). I just felt that the word 'chart' didn't fit in the flow of the poem. Other than that wonderful writing.Thanks for the share.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

thank you for the review :) by chart what i meant was 'plans' - n then again it can be interpreted a.. read more
vspjaguar

6 Years Ago

hmmm alright then! I was reading with a flow and then stopped at that point.I just found that to be .. read more
The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

:) thanks for pointing it out anyway :D



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Oh My Gosh! i love this! This is golden my dear! Keep Writing! You have talent!
Mind checking out some of my stuff? Thanks
~High School

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

thank you hannah :) - sure i would!
Vertigoingnowhere

6 Years Ago

Thanks :). Really though. You are a wondeful writer. ;)
~High School
This is your most powerful work till date in my diaries. Its a knot of desperation....a love child of fading enigma and realism called betrayal. Your imagination of love is in certain way, perfect as I would like to see in a girl/ my girl or any girl. Could you do me a favor dear..... Can you create an epic poem relating to a one-sided love. This is your forte and you are the Queen. As I said before, i don't like feelings called Love & pain, so come on, be sport, create something, I'd fall in love it. Get me soft and down on my knees.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You use quite a simple rhyming scheme that adds to the overall emotion of the poem
Wonderful!


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

glad you like it :D
i love your style of writing. great job.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

thanks :)
ummm...i feel like i know what you meant...beneath those lines lie hurt and pain...when the mask falls off its like you regret having once trusted that person....

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

true. glad you could understand. thank you:)
being me

6 Years Ago

:)
Hi Nisha,

I really like your piece.You beautifully described how the mask of the hypocrite cracked and how you could see right through him( I just assumed its a him). I just felt that the word 'chart' didn't fit in the flow of the poem. Other than that wonderful writing.Thanks for the share.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

thank you for the review :) by chart what i meant was 'plans' - n then again it can be interpreted a.. read more
vspjaguar

6 Years Ago

hmmm alright then! I was reading with a flow and then stopped at that point.I just found that to be .. read more
The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

:) thanks for pointing it out anyway :D
Powerful poem; people aren't always what they seem!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

nope they NEVER are! thanks :)
wow, loved that last stanza so much, there is truth in this write.
Amazing write, powerful!!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

thank you :)
Could be the sequel to your poem 'unrequited love'..
Finally free of feelings to the man cause now you see his perfect mask break..
Beautiful

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

you are right! i never thought of that! :P yea they do fit together very well. thanks a lot :)

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Added on January 8, 2013
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Tags: mask, scales, fog, spell, face, facade

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The Dreamer
The Dreamer

India



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Hey - I am Nisha . I love to dream when I am awake, sadly I don't dream much when I sleep - maybe i drain all my resources before I go to bed... Writing is like a release for me, a source o.. more..

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