This Emotion

This Emotion

A Poem by The Dreamer
"

Still in love..

"

What is this emotion?

My mind a commotion,

In my heart, a burning sensation:

Please give me a potion, for sedation….

………………………………………………………..

 

Is it called anger?

Wanting to bleed him with a dagger,

Make him feel a pain that would linger,

For: he swore he'd never leave, with his last finger.

 

Is it called sorrow?

Weighing me down every morrow,

With no more dreams to follow,

For: without him they are hollow.

 

Is it called depression?

Caused by my pain's oppression,

In losing him, my possession,

For: he was my obsession.

 

Is it called insanity?

Slipping away from humanity,

Betrayed by my affinity,

For: he pulled the strings of my sanity.

 

Is it called numbness?

From my life's emptiness,

Bred by his coldness,

For: he was my fullness.

…………………………………………………………..

 

 

Is it still called love?

Because all above:

I just can't forget him,

Every night I write of him…

 


 

 

© 2015 The Dreamer


Author's Note

The Dreamer
First you feel anger, then sorrow. It's so depressing that you go crazy, and then you become numb. In the end you realize…… you are still in love...

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Featured Review

really nice.........i liked+loved=enjoyed it totally...........
......................it's really a reality,
so..after impressed through ur poem i wanna give u 89/100 without panilty,
it;s so cool.......so amazing...,that shows what isssss cruelty,
...........................it's really a reality............."


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

like what?
krish

6 Years Ago

"THE EMOTION'S,THAT'S ALL R TOTALLY RESTORTION,
ARISES FROM ANGRY CREATION'S,
& HURT'S E.. read more
The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

:) very poetic



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The stages of losing someone are brutal. Still, in the end, we emerge stronger.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Really great poem. It was so realistic and the emotions of the poem were almost tangible. Very creative and strong poem :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Is it called insanity?
Slipping away from humanity,
Betrayed by my affinity,
For: he pulled the strings of my sanity...
i loved that stanza indeed, beautiful write forsure.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh my, this is a strong piece, really enjoyed it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

thank you :)
really nice.........i liked+loved=enjoyed it totally...........
......................it's really a reality,
so..after impressed through ur poem i wanna give u 89/100 without panilty,
it;s so cool.......so amazing...,that shows what isssss cruelty,
...........................it's really a reality............."


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

like what?
krish

6 Years Ago

"THE EMOTION'S,THAT'S ALL R TOTALLY RESTORTION,
ARISES FROM ANGRY CREATION'S,
& HURT'S E.. read more
The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

:) very poetic
soo true!!..

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

:) i knew you could relate to this
Somehow you've created a poem with amazing near dancing metre about love and lost love, such fragile emotions. There's hurt and more here. So hope that fades and your poetry becomes more rooted in smiles. Great use of words.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

thank you - actually i wrote this one a long time ago, its faded already, healed :D
Powerful stuff, love; you've covered the whirling emotion you feel so well!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

:D thank you
i can relate to this, i think everyone can in some way. beautiful poem. simply amazing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

glad you could relate to it.
very deep as usual! a trademark "the dreamer" peom :D

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

vspjaguar

6 Years Ago

yup! you have a style in expressing yourself.
The Dreamer

6 Years Ago

thank you :D
vspjaguar

6 Years Ago

:D

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Added on January 9, 2013
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The Dreamer
The Dreamer

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Hey - I am Nisha . I love to dream when I am awake, sadly I don't dream much when I sleep - maybe i drain all my resources before I go to bed... Writing is like a release for me, a source o.. more..

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