True victim

Tell me things that are not true


and think that I believe.


Oh my poor friend,I pity you.


It’s yourself that you deceive.


The sun will ever rise and set


and you will always be


victim to the lies you tell


and your in securities.

Reviews

[Mari ana biossat]

I forgot that I belonged to this site so I am quite late with the comments. I hope not too late. I have read another of your poetry and what I like is the meter you use. Your messages are strong and so relate-able. Mari Ana.

[Pankaj Lohia]

its says i'm new in your status message.. u seem to be pretty old here lol.. btw its a nice poem :)

[Nicola Farren]

Just put a new poem on xx