This is my view

This is my view

A Poem by Nicola Farren
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All of my work is personal to me and I want to put this poem on first just to say Everyone has their own ideas about life and no one is right or wrong

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We are all human

It's not hard to see

But to know it and feel it

Is to set your self free

Don't be held back

By someone elses view

Views are not answers

And not always true

The meaning of life

Though complex is not hidden

Just covered up by

All the truthes we are given

The circle of life

Is a continuas line

In wich all things are equil

And this view is mine

© 2012 Nicola Farren


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Nicola Farren
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I like it very much. The message is clear. I like the meter you used. It is easy to read and flows. Well done....Mari Ana.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great, gets me thinking. Good message

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good peace with a solid point. Nice flow and I enjoyed the ending, with it being your view. Solid reinforcement of the message. One thing though, did you mean to spell out "equil" in the second to last line?

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Try to live up to others expectations doesnt always work. Be who you are and you will be set free. Be the best "you" you can be. This is what this piece says to me.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh, so much the truth. I enjoyed this read. Thank you for sharing,

Just a few spelling errors:
All the truthes (truths) we are given
Is a continuas (continuous) line
In wich (which) all things are equil (equal)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

whoa! this one is really amazing. : )

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, this is great. Fantastic message and it flows incredibly. You did a great job. :)
-Aud

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Nicola Farren
Nicola Farren

Doncaster, south yorkshire, United Kingdom



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