CONFUSION

Going down this road


when there’s nowhere i should be.


Looking all around


when there’s nothing there to see.


Walking round in circles


leaving footprints with my hands.


Confusion it astounds me


and i do not understand.

Reviews

[Nick Patrick]

Your poem reminds me of my aunt who has prosomatognosia. Such a frustrating condition to be always in a state of confusion. Your poem captures that frustration well.

[Nicola Farren]

Thank you I try hard to capture emotions or feelings in my work

[MoriartyMesa]

This was a nice and yet shocking bit of a read. The reader is given an image of a person either lost in thought or emotion.

[Whiskurz]

A good definition.....Well penned my friend.....Whisk