Reminiscence

Reminiscence

A Poem by nefalnumair

There's a loss in every gain.   
A chink in every armor.   
A pleasure in some pain. 
A low in every high.        
A sorrow in some joy.     
A victor in every battle.     
A war destined to win.
                                                                                                                                      A lie behind a smile.                             
The incentive to a deadly sin.                     
The good before the evil.                      
A story behind an act.                     
The mind of a devil.                                
 Dressed as an angel.  
                            
The secret to a laugh.                         
Tears ready to spill.                                 
Thoughts in a piece of art.                          
The music in those notes.   
                                                                                                                                
Words with ill intentions.                                           
Strength in every love.                                        
Motives behind an action               
And minds
with imperfections...             

© 2017 nefalnumair


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Very creative poem. This hooked me till the end.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nefalnumair

1 Year Ago

Glad you enjoyed it :) Thanks.
Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

You're welcome.
She is going to be an icon of maturity and clear thought process for her generation.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nefalnumair

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reading and reviewing. Tips and Suggestions are most welcome. :)
AFAQ

1 Year Ago

You are free from shackles of metaphor and abstract pointers, which in my opinion are hallmark of a .. read more
nefalnumair

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your encouraging words :)
you are absolutely right,i enjoyed the lesson

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nefalnumair

1 Year Ago

Thank you!
 wordman

1 Year Ago

my pleasure

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Added on November 12, 2017
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Tags: poetry, life, recollections

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nefalnumair

Pakistan



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