Touching you

Touching you

A Poem by Courtney
"

this is about my ex girlfriend

"

Touching you....

why cant you feel me touching you?

im stroking your hair

as it falls down gently

so soft and short,

im caressing your face

the most beautiful thing in the world

im touching your lips

and i can feel them, they're soft,

i dont even wonder why
you never ask me to stop.

But i just see you watching me

lifelessly, i cant bare to see

the way you're looking back at me

with those cold sparkling black eyes.....

 

But im touching you.....why cant you feel me touching you??

 

ive finally come to realize..

when i see the image freeze

im not really touching you

you're on the other side of the screen....

© 2008 Courtney


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ive read this 1 b4 lol but its still good

Posted 11 Years Ago


its beautiful

Posted 11 Years Ago


This was a very exciting read. I was thinking who can this lucky person be? I love the creativity and the imagination and i am a sucker for twist endings. Good job! keep up the imagination.

Posted 11 Years Ago


it almost made me want to cry

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow!!!! Another emotional and great poem...

Josie

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I dont get it???? What do you mean?

Posted 11 Years Ago



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