Touching you

Touching you

A Poem by Courtney

this is about my ex girlfriend


Touching you....

why cant you feel me touching you?

im stroking your hair

as it falls down gently

so soft and short,

im caressing your face

the most beautiful thing in the world

im touching your lips

and i can feel them, they're soft,

i dont even wonder why
you never ask me to stop.

But i just see you watching me

lifelessly, i cant bare to see

the way you're looking back at me

with those cold sparkling black eyes.....


But im touching you.....why cant you feel me touching you??


ive finally come to realize..

when i see the image freeze

im not really touching you

you're on the other side of the screen....

© 2008 Courtney

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ive read this 1 b4 lol but its still good

Posted 12 Years Ago

its beautiful

Posted 12 Years Ago

This was a very exciting read. I was thinking who can this lucky person be? I love the creativity and the imagination and i am a sucker for twist endings. Good job! keep up the imagination.

Posted 12 Years Ago

it almost made me want to cry

Posted 12 Years Ago

Wow!!!! Another emotional and great poem...


Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I dont get it???? What do you mean?

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on April 9, 2008



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