Razor

Razor

A Poem by Courtney
"

anouther one of my weird dark poems

"

You realize

As your blood drains out of you

That this is the end

No more of this

As your bloody razor falls to the floor

Your body grows weak

As the minutes tick by

You feel nothing

just bliss

As your blood runs down the drain

As your life comes to a close

You scream out

wishing someone will hear you

But you know

No one will

Your alone in this cold world

Always have been

But only for a short time

Cut shorter by a razor blades kiss

Knowing that somebody loved you

Just didnt save you in time

Time has run out for you

Your body falls to the floor

Dead

 

© 2008 Courtney


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Wow this one is really poetic, and written in a very beautiful manner. The words chosen were beautiful, powerful and with strong meaning, giving and showing a lot of emotion. Great job, but it seems like all your poems are exactly the same. Try touching on different views on this,

Lingga

Posted 10 Years Ago


aww courtney this is really good i hope u feel better

Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow this is deep but a really good poem! love yas

Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dont worry courtney, life will be better

Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Depressing... just checking up on you... I liked it full of feelings...

Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yup i always feel alone in a crowd of people...

Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can also relate
still feel alone even in the midst of others
I hope you are doing better, here for you if you ever need me

Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is a very dark, yet deep piece. I used to be a cutter myself, so I can relate.


Great Write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

And another great write. My favourite lines:
"You scream out
wishing someone will hear you
But you know
No one will"

I relate to this. It's the story of my life it seems...

Great job!!!!!

Josie



Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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