Darkness

sorry i know its not a happy one i'll put a happy one on soon!

With a nice little twist,

I slit my wrist,

Taking my life,

Setting me fee,

My vision fading away,

My life passing before my eyes,

Staring into darkness,

Death wrapping its icy arms around me

Its cold touch

Release my soul from this agony

I can feel the darkness around,

Its draining vitality from me,

Coldness slowly filling my body,

My vision is fading away,

Laugh, sick sadistic laugh,

That’s the last thing I hear.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Nocturnal illusion]

Very well written..But yet i hear the cry behind the pen..Just hold in there...things will always get better...even if they dont seem like it, they will..I have been there before..more than once...and now i am 206 days clean..not homeless anymore and I have a job and license...So trust me...things always get better for those who try...just hang in there..

-Kev

[a Messenger]

A lot of pain and desperation apparent in this piece.
Well written. I really like the work though I'm sorry
it comes from so much pain.

[Kaelani]

wow thats really good. i love how it rhymes and then stops it makes it sound cooler =)

[chris]

courtney like i said on my last coment life will always get better you just have to wait

[chris' girlfriend]

you are my favorite writer.
i love all of your poems and i can understand them.
i love u courtney :)