A Poem by Courtney



help me

im falling

i see no one here around me

my life is gone

all in vain

i did try

that i did

but i guess i didnt try enough

this is so hard

i need you..but now your gone from me

gone forever and now i probley wont get you back

it hurts

my heart is gone

there was only a little left

but now its all gone

gone forever...

i see nothing

i hear nothing

i see horror

i hear pain


with you i saw the light

but that is now closed off

no more of the light at the end of the tunnal

just me and the darkness..

all alone

© 2008 Courtney

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I know how you feel, I used to be the same, except that in my case it felt like there was no one on my side in the very first place. Just keep moving forwards, for life is for ourselves, and no one else, except for God, to me. I'm not trying to offend anyone. Anyway, just keep holding on, you'll find a person who will love you for who you are someday. I believe that from the beginning of a person's life, they have a name that hangs on them, which is the name of their future one and only true love. Those who don't find it, well, I guess they never really wanted one, or just too negative and didn't believe. Great job in the poem though, I feel every line of it.

Posted 11 Years Ago

sad indeed... but that darkness you find yourself in at the moment doesn't have to be so lonely...

Faerie Blessings!

--faerie whisper (breaking the silence...)

Posted 11 Years Ago

Such a sad and powerful write. So honest and so haunting. I wish we didn't have to go through this sort of s**t. Wish that life would just gives us a fucken break...

Great poem!!!!!!!1 Hope you're okay...


Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

`tunnal` - tunnel
- you'll come out the other end a stronger person for it!
good write - straight from the heart again

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

your never alone ^-^
im here for ya babe

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on May 14, 2008



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life is a lot different now so yea :D its better more..

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