I surrender..

I surrender..

A Poem by Daydreamer
"

I shall always be an art lover.

"

Daydreams slip

through gazing minds,

in weary moments of the day ..

 

glimpses of kindness

and serene smiles

adjust the bigger picture again ..

 

 

 

 

"I surrender to

all the beauty

that which I see

amidst images

of distorted lives."

 

-Manal Ahmed





 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2014 Daydreamer


Author's Note

Daydreamer
If you pause along and catch glances of people,places,recall memories,observe kindness; you shall always find beauty and hope.What a
universe it is!xx

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I am stunned by how beautiful and well thought out this poem is! The message it delivers is one of the most positive and uplifting I have ever seen in a poem, and the picture you included really adds extra spice to it! I don't know any other way to say it, this is truly amazing! :) :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

5 Years Ago

YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH YOU MADE MY HORRIBLE DAY BETTER! THAAAAAANK YOUUUUUUU:')
DoormanDan

5 Years Ago

Anytime! And it's nice to know that I was able to help in someway! :)
Daydreamer

5 Years Ago

Much appreciated 😁



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loved the optimism. simply beautiful

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree with your about me. :) Beauty and inspiration is everywhere, and as you so well said in your poem, you can't fight it, so just give yourself over. It wasn't like mind blowing or anything to me, but I liked it nonetheless.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Daydreamer

5 Years Ago

No no no... All is well, I understood your honest view! But I didn't mean for it to mindblow anyone .. read more
The StoryTeller

5 Years Ago

Oh, okay, that makes sense. xD Anyways, I will take your message and use it, and just listen to what.. read more
The StoryTeller

5 Years Ago

I am going to put it in my general reading list, just to remind me of that.
Once again, I agree with you, The poem is very touching and wonderful.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

5 Years Ago

Thank you :')
🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
This poem was very touching. The words are so meaningful and flow so beautifully. Wonderful job my friend:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

5 Years Ago

Thankssss,Coolio😎💕
Cool Girl

5 Years Ago

Haha, you're welcome!! :)
This a wonderful,profound piece of poetry...bravo!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

5 Years Ago

Hey Noora where have you been? Thank you a lot,dear 💖
I am stunned by how beautiful and well thought out this poem is! The message it delivers is one of the most positive and uplifting I have ever seen in a poem, and the picture you included really adds extra spice to it! I don't know any other way to say it, this is truly amazing! :) :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

5 Years Ago

YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH YOU MADE MY HORRIBLE DAY BETTER! THAAAAAANK YOUUUUUUU:')
DoormanDan

5 Years Ago

Anytime! And it's nice to know that I was able to help in someway! :)
Daydreamer

5 Years Ago

Much appreciated 😁
This was a little piece of delight. Reading the title, i expected some tale depicting helplessness; but look what u've got here instead.. It's inspiring, we all need to know there's always beauty and happiness around waiting to catch our eyes.. I surrender too :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Daydreamer

5 Years Ago

Thanks a lot..♥
Beautifully written and visually well layer out.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much,dear 💜
MomzillaNC

5 Years Ago

yvw :D
"I surrender to
all the beauty
that which I see
amidst images
of distorted lives."

When we see beauty, we see a reflection of our higher self... they're right in saying that beauty is in the eye of the beholder.
Wonderful write my friend.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Daydreamer

5 Years Ago

Zahra,THANKS TO YOU!💐💐💐💐
glimpses of kindness

and serene smiles

adjust the bigger picture again ..




Simply beautiful thank you
for sharing and thank you for
your kind review and comments
on my page.



Blessings. Benita

Posted 5 Years Ago


Daydreamer

5 Years Ago

Thankyouuu💘
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

5 Years Ago

you're welcome. :)

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