I surrender..

I surrender..

A Poem by Daydreamer
"

I shall always be an art lover.

"

Daydreams slip

through gazing minds,

in weary moments of the day ..

 

glimpses of kindness

and serene smiles

adjust the bigger picture again ..

 

 

 

 

"I surrender to

all the beauty

that which I see

amidst images

of distorted lives."

 

-Manal Ahmed





 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2014 Daydreamer


Author's Note

Daydreamer
If you pause along and catch glances of people,places,recall memories,observe kindness; you shall always find beauty and hope.What a
universe it is!xx

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I am stunned by how beautiful and well thought out this poem is! The message it delivers is one of the most positive and uplifting I have ever seen in a poem, and the picture you included really adds extra spice to it! I don't know any other way to say it, this is truly amazing! :) :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH YOU MADE MY HORRIBLE DAY BETTER! THAAAAAANK YOUUUUUUU:')
DoormanDan

9 Years Ago

Anytime! And it's nice to know that I was able to help in someway! :)
Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

Much appreciated 😁



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I like the space some of the lines exist within.

But then, I'm partial to suggestion more so than conclusion.

Nice work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

Suggestion about how to feel/do?!
Sleiman Azizi

9 Years Ago

Sorry, what I mean is that suggesting something group poetry is often more powerful than telling it .. read more
Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

I guess, as well
"I surrender to
all the beauty
that which I see
amidst images
of distorted lives."

-Manal Ahmed


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"I surrender to
all the beauty
that which I see
amidst images
of distorted lives."

Zen ….. Love it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

Thankyou,Pryde💖
Nicely penned :) Well done

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

Thank you😎
Here is a true poet's mind at work....

"I surrender to
all the beauty
that which I see
amidst images
of distorted lives."

There's much beauty to behold in the ugliness that surrounds us. I heartily agree and appreciate your beautiful thought. I'd love to be your friend.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

AWW...that's so kind!
My pleasure,for suree ♥♥♥
Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

THANKS TO YOU!
DIVYA

9 Years Ago

You are most welcome. Keep writing and sharing and keep in touch :)
Yes, yes. Wonderful and inspiring message here. Glad I dropped by on your page. Keep writing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for the encouragement!♥
A poet can find beauty in the simple things..and you my friend are a stellar poet.
Your poem is lovely.

:) Julie

Posted 9 Years Ago


Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much,gorgeous woman
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S.F
Your words in this poem have the power to renew corrupted faith and hope, even in the most pessimistic people (me). I don't find that in a lot of poems. I must admit you did a great job. Your words are very brief yet they carve deep meaning into us. Beautiful. Well done!
-S.F

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

Do you know how much this means? I'm a "details" person, I feel, and contemplate every single thing .. read more
You moulded your views nicely in your poem...simple and beautiful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

Thanks!

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