I surrender..

I surrender..

A Poem by Daydreamer
"

I shall always be an art lover.

"

Daydreams slip

through gazing minds,

in weary moments of the day ..

 

glimpses of kindness

and serene smiles

adjust the bigger picture again ..

 

 

 

 

"I surrender to

all the beauty

that which I see

amidst images

of distorted lives."

 

-Manal Ahmed





 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2014 Daydreamer


Author's Note

Daydreamer
If you pause along and catch glances of people,places,recall memories,observe kindness; you shall always find beauty and hope.What a
universe it is!xx

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Featured Review

I am stunned by how beautiful and well thought out this poem is! The message it delivers is one of the most positive and uplifting I have ever seen in a poem, and the picture you included really adds extra spice to it! I don't know any other way to say it, this is truly amazing! :) :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH YOU MADE MY HORRIBLE DAY BETTER! THAAAAAANK YOUUUUUUU:')
DoormanDan

9 Years Ago

Anytime! And it's nice to know that I was able to help in someway! :)
Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

Much appreciated 😁



Reviews

A very unique structure that makes your views come out, and into focus, with startling clarity. The message is duly noted!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

Many thanks for the time and comment!💘
I surrender to the simple beauty of your poem.


"I surrender to
all the beauty
that which I see
amidst images
of distorted lives."

The beauty is always in the imperfections...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much! It means a lot to receive these words from a gorgeous poetess like you!♥
Frieda P

9 Years Ago

You're sweet to say Ahmed, this is excellent. :)
Such small gestures can change an outlook. This is an uplifting poem for sure, Manal!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

Exactly! Thank you :)!
I got attached to the structure of poem,so nice......a good work indeed.....

Posted 9 Years Ago


Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

Thank you,Anne :)
Excellent writing my friend. Not just descriptive but emotional images as well.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

I was waiting for your opinion,specifically.. I knew you'd get what I mean..
Thanks for readin.. read more
Structurally unique and engagingly beautiful. A splendid message among the art form. Excellent...:)................

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

Wow! Thank you so much, Sir 😃
I am such an art lover..... It's the most beautiful thing in .. read more
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

I agree. You are welcome artfully...:).....
Such a good poem, made me feel so calm! Nature is the beauty i always surrender to! I'm always so impressed by those who can write short poems, and the reader gets so much from it. You are one my dear

Posted 9 Years Ago


Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

Not only nature... People... Places...incidents..memories...THE UNIVERSE IN ENTIRETY😍😍😍😍.. read more
This is a wonderful poem :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

Hello,my new friend 😃 thank youu so much ♥
Norah

9 Years Ago

My pleasure
I love how simple yet meaningful it is. It reminds me of when I have a bad day and a stranger smiles at me, it makes me think that maybe things are not so bad after all. Such little things do portray beauty and hope :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

Yeeep! Thank you for reading and reviewing😍😍😍
Absolutely exquisite, and it truly does flow beautifully. A note of beauty and hope in itself.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

I am an art lover for life! Thank you so much for your constant support!😍😍😍😍

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