Dream Dimension

I believe in the things only I can see.

I travelled through my senses
and yes, my dreams travelled
all within me
~
Thoughts as fires
Dreams as wars
Truths as pillars


Night cloaks and morning windows;
Swallowed walls and spilled cores

Sunsets swallowed by the seas
Strange music and offline notes

Dreams breaking into pearls
Ardent skin and woven beams

Cracks, tunnels, and fleeting wheels
Locked forevers and freedom streams

Visions as friends
Stars as walls
Daydreams,layers, and a million thoughts

Discovered poetry, and learned evermores

Dreaming as a religion
Fearlessness as a chisel

Delicate remedies and elegant dreams


The skies as eyes for what we do


The streets as home for what we dream

Reviews

[Rana]

It's surprising how it was just a couple of days ago I had been thinking about how I felt that we travel different dimensions through the different senses we possess. And how all of them superimpose one another to let us be able to fully experience this mortal reality. It's such a beautifully multi-dimensional world; while the world we visit in dreams (the literal ones) is such a contrast to it, where we have none of the senses feeding us with information, yet, dreams feel so real sometimes. Oh, I seem to have a lot to say, I hope I don't bore you. I really love this poem, ahhh. Guess what, I'm shaking my head, literally, because I just can't quote a favorite line, I can't, I'll just end up quoting your whole poem here. I absolutely admire your skillfulness, the way you create beauty through words and breathe meanings and wisdom into them. There's rhythm, lovely smooth flow and when I let your lines form images in my head, it's a great great experience. You're the queen of metaphors, haha. Then when I got to the end, I felt déjà vu and you'll see what I mean, Manal. I also have a suggestion (about some changes) to make, if you don't mind:
I have travelled through my senses
and yes, my dreams travel
all within me
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And do keep writing my friend! :)

[Daydreamer]

You're one of the best and most flattering people who ever talked about my poetry.. your reviews are holy to me and are enough to make me believe I am humbly "talented"
Your river of amazing sentiments is all I need on this site to suffice ❤❤❤❤❤
Thanks sooo much😍

[sohadtolba]

It is nice. Very sensational. Keep it up.

[Daydreamer]

It's a pleasure to hear from you :)
Thanks much!

[SmittyJas]

Lovely poetry as I read it stunning to the senses pleasing to the brain.

[Daydreamer]

This is so wonderful to know 🌸
Thank you dearly!

[Celie Rose]

I liked your poem. Excellent imagination. Beautifully written. Keep writing.

[Daydreamer]

Thank you so and so much❤

[Amber Lily]

It is true that many things the human race believes is seems like nothing but a dream. You have some very interesting thoughts running down the page, it makes the reader think. This is also beautifully penned, with a free flowing feel :)

[Daydreamer]

You always see things so differently than I do :). .
Thanks much for coming around!🙌💝

[Amber Lily]

Always a pleasure :)

[Jennie Baron]

Impressive write! Imaginative and well presented on the page, with the varied lengths of stanzas adding interest. I like this a lot.

[Daydreamer]

I'm very very glad you do!
Many special thanks ❤

[KWP]

Ok you know I love your mind - now I would like you to take the next step and use the 'show don't tell' rule - I belive if you do that this here poem of your would rock any dreamkeepers box right open XX LOVE YA

[Daydreamer]

HELLOOOOOO❤
Finally heard from you, on an imp daaayyy too 😊
Great energy picking!

[KWP]

hehehe - didn't you get my other correspondence chickkyface?!?!?!?!?!

[Leslie Philibert]

What struck me most was the excellent mix of verse lengths, nice balance, well written.

[Daydreamer]

That's so wonderful to hear!
Thank you so much, Sir.

[andrew mitchell]

A profound write, heavy in the thinking, I hope you got some sleep! Very good thoughts!

[Daydreamer]

Hahahahhahha...
You won't believe if I told you that was written down in 10 minutes (as a first draft)!
Thank you so much for the uplifting comment! :)

[wordman]

a thought provoking write,i liked it !

[Daydreamer]

Merci beacoup :)

[Valentine]

Thoughts come for free. How we use those thoughts makes our destiny. Valentine

[Daydreamer]

Precisely!
Merci :)