Just a love note

Just a love note

A Poem by Daydreamer
"

We all have a dark and a light side. Love will trigger both.

"
You made this
word lover
finally get
her dreams awake

packed eternities
cracked open
and spilled in fantasies

Till the shadows fall,
and the lights
shine out loud,
may we be loved

© 2017 Daydreamer


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"...Love will trigger both", I'll cite you on that.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Read this one again because I have already read all your posted poems. Methinks you need to start uploading your beautiful poetry again, friend!
Greatly missed you, and hope you come back soon!

Posted 3 Months Ago


"packed eternities
cracked open
and spilled in fantasies

Till the shadows fall"

Posted 1 Year Ago


Love this pragmatic joting. Reminiscent of a fresh blossom opening with the morning's first light. I will savor the fresh aroma, and think of you.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

1 Year Ago

Loveeeeeeee this😍 made my month
Brings synethesia, in the second stanza- pictures of some sparkling purple potion in a vial, bubbling and fizzy, the essence is ecstatic. Your words are like chemicals. Making beautiful reactions. They're eloquent, it's so easy to love them. Through the lights, through the dark, may we be loved, amen, xoxoxo.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Daydreamer

1 Year Ago

How sweet and kind of you!!!😍😍😍 you made my day with your words, much grateful💜 please s.. read more
Rana

1 Year Ago

nicely done, it's been a while since I read something so sweet. "may we be loved".......yes I wish this for you.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

1 Year Ago

Thank you for always supporting me since day 1 here💜 i miss you so muchh
Patricia

1 Year Ago

You are welcome and yes sorry for always being disappearing but life has kept me from many people an.. read more
Daydreamer

1 Year Ago

I love you♥♥♥♥
Lovely use of words! 'Packed eternities', 'spilled fantasies'...all results of solid imagery. You're quite the thinker. Loved it!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

1 Year Ago

Thats so kind of you!! Thaaanks 😍
Powerful words. I like that you emphasize love not just for one person or a couple but for everyone. Great writing that truly helps the reader awaken fantasies!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

1 Year Ago

Very grateful for your kindness and support❤
Love the last line...how you address this love letter to all humanity, and not just one person...we all deserve love, laughter and art...and we should fill our lives with them! :))

Posted 3 Years Ago


Daydreamer

1 Year Ago

My wholllleeee lovveee😍😍😍😍

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Added on June 7, 2017
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