You're a waste of time

You're a waste of time

A Poem by !!..Love..!!

 

YOU’RE A WASTE OF TIME

 

I know you’re the right one for me,

But I also know your heart doesn’t beat for me,

My life was and will always be the same.

As I’m not waiting for you now,

As…you really never ever came.

I even never asked you to stay,

I rather opted to walk away.

I saw you in my dreams tonight,

Creating all those scenes of fight…

You may call it frustration,

As you never created that sensation…

You’re actually just a waste of time,

You never even tried to read my mind…

So…I just happily want to say

My final “GOOD BYE…”

© 2008 !!..Love..!!


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Not an offense..but I don't understand how it can be said so easily..or rather How It Can Be Said..
'My final Good Bye'
love is something (i believe) i feel..But the context of Good bye in relation to love and that is also in a sense of the Final one..I'm sorry i never agree to this.
The only scenario that it fits to is when we die..(but love never says good bye even after death)..So it's quite confusing for my part.
I can't say you're in love or not..you need to judge it. But one thing i must say it in my beliefs there is no difference in love or attraction or infatuation... Love is there always,but the more you nourish it, is the more it flourishes.
..aawhhh...A long lecture.. lol.
But your poem is simply awesome..see how much reaction it brought to my chemicals...lol. :)
take care..and love dear Love.
Blessings..


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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its lovely.. i have been there.. its hard but thats the way its supposed to be..

Posted 15 Years Ago


I like this I can feel the emotion involved. Goodbyes are hard I have been there.....Kim

Posted 15 Years Ago


It's not so easy to say goodbye dear, But I liked it, he hehe!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh This is sad :(

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice write..good end!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I actually sensed that feel of anger in this one.
but, its a great write indeed!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Not an offense..but I don't understand how it can be said so easily..or rather How It Can Be Said..
'My final Good Bye'
love is something (i believe) i feel..But the context of Good bye in relation to love and that is also in a sense of the Final one..I'm sorry i never agree to this.
The only scenario that it fits to is when we die..(but love never says good bye even after death)..So it's quite confusing for my part.
I can't say you're in love or not..you need to judge it. But one thing i must say it in my beliefs there is no difference in love or attraction or infatuation... Love is there always,but the more you nourish it, is the more it flourishes.
..aawhhh...A long lecture.. lol.
But your poem is simply awesome..see how much reaction it brought to my chemicals...lol. :)
take care..and love dear Love.
Blessings..


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your so young Love, that you couldn't possibly know if "this person" was right for you, but if your spririt wants to feel love, then feel the love in this place, and do your thing..

Take care Love,
really and truly

Love from
Me

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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