Ultimate loss

Ultimate loss

A Poem by !!..Love..!!
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A Jorio

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I'm lost this way,

By killing myself everyday,

All I could say-

My conscience passed away!

© 2008 !!..Love..!!


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oh...!very sad and painful^-^...!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


living this way is the toughest thing to do....ever....i hope this aint true for you, not anymore, at least!!!

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

Posted 15 Years Ago


Interesting. Made me think about what you are really talking about. Nice read, thanks :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


Simple yet true... once you lose yourself in the wild, it is hard to bring yourself back on track especially if you are really lost. I almost lost myself but I am just glad that I took the strength to ask God to help me to move on with life. Life is really a journey that never ends. :)

Great write!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is truly the ultimate loss, loosing yourself

Posted 15 Years Ago


oh! very painful!

Posted 15 Years Ago


concise yet profound. depressive yet beautiful.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Oh so sad!! :(
Lovely

Posted 15 Years Ago


Yes! I agree..
It's the ultimate loss...when our conscience began to die.
Great write! :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 7, 2008

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